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Poem of 16th October 2011


Poem of 16th October 2011
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   Rayray  From an Egg    Supporting Member
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First posted on 16th October, then modified from Canuk Greg's helpful criticism.
18/Oct/11 8:53 AM
   Canuk Greg  From Ottawa, Canada    Supporting Member
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Wonderful Ray, and I gave suggestions, not criticism. Well done my friend!
18/Oct/11 9:20 AM
   Kathy  From Valrico, Florida, USA
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Hi Rayray,
I'm afraid I usually focus on the small day to day details of life rather than on the big picture. Your poem reminds me that I should try to keep in mind just what a teeny speck in the universe I actually am! My worries are totally insignificant.
18/Oct/11 10:06 AM
   The Phantom  From Not The Opera
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Well done Rayray. Magnifique!
18/Oct/11 5:42 PM
   Kathy  From Maryland/USA    Supporting Member
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How wonderful, Ray! Your mind works in such a unique way. Thank you for sharing this with us.
19/Oct/11 2:42 AM
   shosho  From los angeles    Supporting Member
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Ok Rayray, now I'm really feeling small! Actually when you really think about it, it's very excruciatingly difficult to think about forever. Just as you stretch your mind to a limitless horizon, it hits a wall somewhere. Try to go beyond it.
21/Oct/11 1:53 PM
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