Illustrated poem: TODAY

First written and posted on 7th February 2011. This version is a possible replacement for here. Well! I guess I like this version best - but HalT likes the earlier version best - so both will stay !!!


First written and posted on 7th February 2011. This version is a possible replacement for here. Well! I guess I like this version best - but HalT likes the earlier version best - so both will stay !!!
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   HalT  From S Carolina
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Gee Rayray, you kinda put me on the spot. But OK, let's see...
First, the poem itself has not changed, right?
That leaves us with the illustrations/pictures surrounding the poem. My aesthetic skills are somewhat lacking and I'm afraid that I do not see much difference in the two pictures. (By that I mean that while I noticed that you removed one picture and added another and rearranged them around the poem, my focal point was the poem.)
But, if forced to make a choice, I would go with the earlier one.
02/Feb/12 12:52 PM
   Kate  From Sydney
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Actually I like this outlay better!! But they're almost equal!!
25/Apr/12 9:28 PM
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